http://InDarkness.darkicon.com/2007/09/22/the-cart/ All of us... even the world itself... began in darkness. Fri, 25 Jul 2008 09:15:22 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.2.1 http://InDarkness.darkicon.com/2007/09/22/the-cart/#comment-53 DarkIcon Tue, 25 Sep 2007 04:33:24 +0000 http://InDarkness.darkicon.com/2007/09/22/the-cart/#comment-53 Yes, the effect was intentional. The guy escapes, but he leaves his sanity behind in that pit. Yes, the effect was intentional. The guy escapes, but he leaves his sanity behind in that pit.

]]> http://InDarkness.darkicon.com/2007/09/22/the-cart/#comment-52 WeREwOLf Mon, 24 Sep 2007 19:33:45 +0000 http://InDarkness.darkicon.com/2007/09/22/the-cart/#comment-52 I think the ending seemed "rushed" to impress upon the reader the whirlwind of insanity gripping the protagonist throughout the remainder of his life after those nightmarish events, to the point that everything blurred together in his mind because from his point of view he was forever fleeing in terror from that last moment that drove him over the edge. At least, that's what I got from it - and it's why I liked it. I think the ending seemed “rushed” to impress upon the reader the whirlwind of insanity gripping the protagonist throughout the remainder of his life after those nightmarish events, to the point that everything blurred together in his mind because from his point of view he was forever fleeing in terror from that last moment that drove him over the edge. At least, that’s what I got from it - and it’s why I liked it.

]]> http://InDarkness.darkicon.com/2007/09/22/the-cart/#comment-51 nate Mon, 24 Sep 2007 17:05:07 +0000 http://InDarkness.darkicon.com/2007/09/22/the-cart/#comment-51 I thought the ending was a bit rushed, but otherwise pretty decent. The story indeed reminds me of HPL's style, but I thought this one was better written. I thought the ending was a bit rushed, but otherwise pretty decent. The story indeed reminds me of HPL’s style, but I thought this one was better written.

]]> http://InDarkness.darkicon.com/2007/09/22/the-cart/#comment-47 WeREwOLf Sun, 23 Sep 2007 20:25:13 +0000 http://InDarkness.darkicon.com/2007/09/22/the-cart/#comment-47 Man, that was badass. Especially the ending. I dunno why you think it was inferior, sure maybe it could use some editing and polish, but I liked it just the same. Man, that was badass. Especially the ending. I dunno why you think it was inferior, sure maybe it could use some editing and polish, but I liked it just the same.

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