In Deed, Chapter 2

Read it here.


  1. WeREwOLf, February 25, 2008:

    NOW it’s starting to look like a horror story. :)

  2. nate, February 26, 2008:

    For some reason, Ghosts of Mars popped into my head when I read this second chapter. That movie was lousy, but this story isn’t. Good work.

  3. Kragon, February 26, 2008:

    Thank You nate! I was trying to remember what this was reminding me of. Ghosts of Mars…and I agree the movie sucked. Maybe I repressed it, that’s why I couldn’t remember. Ha!

    But Hell Yeah, this was a hell of a lot better. Keep going Marc. Looking really good!

  4. DarkIcon, February 26, 2008:

    Now that you mention it, it does have a “Ghosts of Mars” feel to it; especially the final scene of this chapter. I seem to remember something like that in the movie.

    Glad you’re liking it so far.

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