I’ve mentioned the collaborative fiction website storymash.com a few times in recent weeks, and I finally decided to give it a proper test drive. I posted something a couple of days ago.
It’s the first chapter of a story that I may or may not finish, depending on the kind of response I get. The story is called “The Longest Night” and the title chapter is “Awake”. If you decide to go over there and read it, pay special attention to my note at the very end of the chapter. So far, the response has been encouraging.
I think you have to be a member of storymash.com to leave feedback on that site. You could always come back here and say whatever you want to say, but a lot more people would see your comment over there. Plus, by registering there you get the option of actually writing the next chapter of the story.