The Forgotten: Page 10

Here’s Page 10 of The Forgotten


  1. nate, May 8, 2009:

    Love it. Just the right amount of story to keep me satisified, and waiting for more. Will check back early Monday morning, then repeatedly until page 11 shows up.

  2. DarkIcon, May 8, 2009:

    I’m making an effort to keep the story moving at a brisk pace and not get bogged down. The part that took place over the past three or so pages was originally going to go on for much longer, until I reminded myself that this was a SHORT story. I’m in a hurry to get to the good stuff. ;)

  3. nate, May 8, 2009:

    If this were back in the day of the 20-page postings I’d say flesh it out, but for this current format I think it’s at just the right pace. As you can tell, I’m very interested in this story and how it turns out. I look forward to the surprises and revelations that I believe are in store.

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