The Forgotten: Page 53

Here is the next page of the serial fantasy story: “The Forgotten”.

Hope you’re enjoying the ride. I don’t think David is.


4 Comments

  1. nate, September 9, 2009:

    Short again, but I keep coming back for more. This one hinted that David has something to tell the voice, and a previous one hinted that David had already learned the name. I can’t see it yet, but I’m sure it’ll be clear when it’s all over.

    I am curious as to how he’s going to activate that rune when he’s tied down, but I expect there’ll be some way for him to get an arm free. Be back on Friday.

  2. DarkIcon, September 9, 2009:

    You should re-read the section in the barn. Toward the end, there’s an obvious place where David is listening to something. I never said what he heard, only that he was listening.

    Also, the Pilgrim’s instructions on the rune never actually said that David had to touch it. ;)

  3. nate, September 9, 2009:

    That’s the part I was thinking of. When the girl was saying something…

    I also caught the bit that when he was being washed the area was tingling…

    As with all your stories, once it’s finished I’ll be copying it to a Word documnet for future reference.

    Lately I’ve been re-reading sections in your stories pertaining to Eric Hood, and what I perceive to be his alter-incarnation.

  4. DarkIcon, September 9, 2009:

    The page=-1 trick in the URL works with this story just like it did in “Court of the Abominatrix”. Makes copy/paste much easier, just be sure the page has loaded completely first.

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