In Deed: Page 69

Today’s topic in “How to Write Serial Fiction”: using scene transitions to make readers crazy.

Here’s page 69 of the sci-fi/horror serial “In Deed”.


  1. nate, May 3, 2010:

    A good transition, and yes – it’s driving me crazy. I’m wondering just what Gilliam actually shot at, and why.

  2. DarkIcon, May 3, 2010:

    Oh he shot the fuel cell. He shot it INTENTIONALLY. The only question is: how big of a mess did it make?

  3. nate, May 3, 2010:

    No, that’s not the only question. How did he protect himself, and maybe even Shaw, from the aftermath? I’m sure there’s more, but that’s the one sticking out in my mind right now.

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