In Deed: Page 101

Here is page 101 of the sci-fi horror story “In Deed”.

This page was intended to be both page 101 and 102, but I wasn’t happy with the way the text flowed when I broke it, so I left it as one chunk. Yes, this does mean that there won’t be a page Friday.


  1. nate, September 9, 2010:

    Great. I was away on a business trip to Long Island and just got home. I don’t usually check the site on Thursdays, but was hoping maybe the Wednesday update was here. I’ll print this out and read it before going to bed. I’m sure I’ll have more comments to make tomorrow, but might wait until next week.

  2. nate, September 10, 2010:

    OK, that bit went by pretty quick but I guess there’s really not a lot of places to give it more dettail. Of course now I’m wondering about that roar and Ethan’s smile.

    The roar could be equipment, engines, or something else.

    Why is Ethan smiling about it?

    I guess this story might wrap up this month? Be back next week to see what happens.

  3. Caber, September 10, 2010:

    Whereabouts on Long Island were you? I live towards the eastern end of LI.

    I am guessing Ethan is smiling because that roar is the sound of the engines coming to life and he hopes they will soon be off the planet. Something tells me DI might have a different plan in store.

  4. DarkIcon, September 10, 2010:

    Well… the ship is going to start moving; I can tell you THAT much. ;)

  5. nate, September 10, 2010:

    I was in Ronkonkoma, less than a mile from the airport. Stayed at the Hilton Gardens.

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