In Deed: Page 102

Here it is.


  1. nate, September 14, 2010:

    I was wondering when this page would hit, but didn’t want to be a bother by asking.

    Now I’m wondering just what it is that Shaw said “I KNOW” about? Is there something wrong with the engines or ship? Is there something holding them down?

    Will we see 103 before the weekend?

    Tandem appears to sense something going on, and wants to be ready to fight it.

  2. DarkIcon, September 14, 2010:

    He hears something wrong with the ship (specifically, the engines working hard and the ship barely moving). That’s not catastrophic, but they both prefer a fast getaway. Ethan was wanting to run up to the cockpit and tell Shaw how to fly the ship, which she wouldn’t have taken very well.

    As for 103? No idea. It isn’t written yet, so its not looking good.

  3. nate, September 14, 2010:

    That just means it’ll be all the better when it is written.

    Now to try and figure out why the ship isn’t moving like it should.

  4. DarkIcon, September 14, 2010:

    There are two explanations. One is so simple and obvious that you probably overlooked it.

  5. epm, September 15, 2010:

    Nice last minute surprise !!! I was expecting the soldier to appear from somewhere and kill Ethan, although this would have been a very bad end.
    Something like: they were fighting a being much more powerfull than they could manage. The being decided to stop playing by the rules and killed them so, they never had a chance anyway. Some movies end like this and I hate them.
    But my first bet is that the soldier is holding the ship. How is he anchored is a nice question.
    Second bet: more weight on the ship than what it was made to carry.

  6. nate, September 23, 2010:

    OK, it’s Thursday so now I have to ask. Any update arriving this week? Things have been very quiet around here lately. Maybe I’m the only one left waiting for this story to be completed. I got so bored yesterday I re-read all the stories on BODP, and now I’m starting over on The Inquisitors.

  7. epm, September 24, 2010:

    Hey, I check this site frequently also.
    And I am waiting for this one to be finished.

  8. nate, September 28, 2010:

    No blog post, but page 103 is up if you scroll to the end of page 102 and hit next.

    Great page, and an excellent change of pace. Still not sure what’s keeping the ship from moving normally, but at this point I don’t care because there’s about to be one heck of a confrontation.

  9. Chris, September 29, 2010:

    Just so you know DI, I’m checking in daily for updates as well.

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