Other Side of the Eye, Page 6

Page 6 is up. You know where to go, but in case you don’t, here’s the link..


3 Comments

  1. nate, October 9, 2011:

    Printed it out to read either tonight or in the morning. I’m sure it’ll be good, but will post thoughts after I’ve had a chance to actually read it.

  2. nate, October 11, 2011:

    A bit on the slow side, but very good. I think it’ll read better the second time around, when the whole scene can be read in entirety instead of a bit at a time.

    I am finding this story very engaging and look forward to each additional page.

  3. Caber, October 12, 2011:

    He’d seen him chase small animals… never catching them.

    Just curious as to what kind of “small animals” you had in mind while writing this sentence. I can attest from experience that nearly any kind of “small animal” that visits my backyard while Widow is on patrol does not usually leave in one piece.

    Story is moving along nicely.

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